Can someone please review my SOP ? Would be greatly appreciated :)

[Joey.Joe]

Hi everyone,

I've taken a few cracks at my SOP. I'm applying to Brock U's Social Justice and Equity Program and want to make sure i'm on the ball.

Can someone please review for me ? 

STATEMENT .docx

[Joey.Joe]

STATEMENT .pdf

[newguy]

Hey Joey! I'll happily review your SOP. I need my SOP reviewed too. It'd be much much appreciated if you can. I might be of limited help though because I'm from India and my perspective on your statement will be totally different but maybe I'll be able to scoop out some grammatical errors and inconsistencies. I can't view the files you've uploaded so maybe you should PM me.

[newguy]

Another post so now I'll be notified of replies, forgot to tick that on the previous one.