Help Proof Reading Statement of Intent?

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Is it a no-no to start a thread where we give each other feedback on our Statements of Purpose/Letters of Intent? Obviously it would be risky to post them in the thread body because of plagiarism but is it a problem via PM? I just feel like the different schools sometimes ask for vastly different essays and, for me at least, what makes sense in my brain could have stopped translating onto the paper a half dozen pages ago. I need fresh eyes, and while I love my girlfriend dearly, she is no academic. It would also be especially useful since there are people already in the programs that either lurk or post here. If anyone is applying to the same schools and programs is interested, post!