Fulbright personal statement

[Mahammad]

Hello guys,

I've completed my personal statement for Fulbright Student scholarship. Is there anyone can help me to edit it and give some suggestions how to improve further?

Thanks.

[coracora]

Hi! I could give you some feedback on your personal statement if you still need it. But my grammar is still not very good, so you check elsewhere, for example, here, or just use Grammarly, though you'll still need someone to look at it. And if you don't need help anymore, I hope you got into school! 

Edited October 30, 2016 by coracora