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GRE Issue Essay:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Today humans have DETERIORATED earth's climate & resources to such a EXTENT that the effects are irrevocable however with the advent of ingenious solutions as result improvement technology can decrease the rate of extinction of human race.

Computers,which were once considered futile have their DOMINANCE in every field that someone can imagine.With the rapid development in computer science,PHYSICAL & BIOLOGICAL sciences our LIFESTYLES are becoming sophisticated.In fact BIOLOGICAL improvements have played a vital role in decreasing the diseases & death rates drastically over the last few decades.Advancements in Physical sciences in coherence with computational science have changed the way we communicate with people, which are faster,efficient when compared to the facilities our ancestors.Avid of the 21st century a new field called Machine learning, of computational science emerged and entrenched its roots in most of THE sectors,whose effects are the products that we use in our QUOTIDIAN like google, facebook , online money transfer,electric vehicles,autopilot systems etc.

All the technologies that we are using to make our life SIMPLER are at the cost of losing our Cognition ability, social relations etc.For example today we use mobile apps for each and everything.We have reached a state where we cannot or complete our tasks in the absence of these apps.We use reminders for every task that we need to perform which will indirectly WEAKENS the inbuilt natural reminder within our brain because of lack of usage over a PERIOD of time.