Critique Sociology Statement of Purpose

[inooradd]

Hey guys. I am applying to Sociology programs to assess immigrant families and second-generation child development. Could you please review my statement and provide honest feedback? I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!

P.s. its currently too long and could use some advice on where to cut.

Personal Statement_UT Austin.docx

[Wanumman]

" The page you are trying to access is not available for your account. "

I suggest uploading it to Google Drive and sharing the link.