SoP Introduction

[Bubal]

Hello, would like to know your opinion about this intro im workin in. I need a strong SoP, the deadline is tomorrow. So recommendations are more than welcome .

(need to find the translation ofthe quote)

“La vía de cada hombre es un camino hacia si mismo, el ensayo de un camino, el boceto de un sendero”(Herman Hesse). As son of an Argentinian who left his country for political reasons, I grew up in a family where politics was a real presence. This, in addition to my promiscuous interest to understand what was going on around me, to look beyond day-to-day realities resulted in that not much escaped my notice. However, in spite of my natural curiosity, when I graduated from high school I still had no idea of what I wanted to study or where I wanted to go in life. What direction towards personal growth? Study? Work?

I was decided to expand my horizons, and experiment life in another country; I took a gap year. After four months working in Madrid with Cirque du Soleil and meetings with a number of embassies where I looked into various possible countries to visit, I travelled to New Zealand where I studied English, explored the islands and gave much thought about my future. I realized, twelve thousand miles away from home, that I wanted to study Policy."

I also want to introduce some elements to exaplain part of my profile:

"It was in third year when I could choose what I wanted to study and the professors began to take us students more into account. This was when I began to really really confortable in my studies, I began to develop my critical thinking capacities and this was reflected in my scores. What I really enjoyed was my year’s specialization in Political Analysis when I was able to take subjects such as Political Psychosociology, Political Economy, etc.. with which I developed analytical and quantitative skills. My GRE dropped a little during this period when I fell ill; I hope that my other strengths will compensate for this.

In terms of your program, I am particularly interested in "

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