review my personal statement

[kswlwe3]

Its for this program:

https://www.uoguelph.ca/executiveprograms/food

and here is my statement:

 

Throughout university, the agribusiness world has always intrigued me. With food costs increasing and technology becoming more accessible, agricultural technology is allowing food to be produced and processed in exciting ways. Therefore, I believe agricultural technologies will continue to have astonishing growth and impact the world socially and economically. With this opportunity, I plan on gaining a unique learning experience, gathering information and networking with people of all backgrounds to work as one to push the boundaries forward. I expect to gain an in depth look into agribusiness and analyze groundbreaking moves being made for the future. I would like to learn the necessary tools and skills to perform professional analyses and expand my knowledge regularly with the intellectually engaging class led by industry leading professors. With the MBA I plan on leading the research and development team of an agribusiness technology entity looking to make exciting breakthroughs.