I'm on my 2nd draft of my SOP. My first one was horrible and now this one, although much more concise i'm just not sure about it. I haven't included any personality traits--because I'm not sure if i should? Should I acknowledge 2 low grades on my transcript, but also acknowledge how i've excelled in another area? Should I mention being Secretary of the Spanish Honorary Society, and volunteering I've done?
Oh, and i also have no idea what to write for an intro
So, if anyone wouldn't mind looking it over I'd appreciate it. THANKS