This is my second time applying for MS, I think the first time around my SOP was not upto the mark. Please review my SOP and suggest on how to improve it. Thanks for the help.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-UqzHNzL8W_o4CsvNNipGgVyLDyLtPYLOUMRIPf6Ox0/edit