Here is my SOP - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XlMxlnZK6pNWNrFapPjGX58CRUZ0Sw_2wKDYhnvwvTQ/edit?usp=sharing
I think I have tried to address most question adcom might want to hear about - why MS, future degree, what field, why this field and my research interests/background.
What I feel I am struggling with is the flow of the SOP. It sounds a bit dull as of now. Any advice on how to improve?