is it ok to mention that i want to work for sometime and than pursue my PhD? i want to know what i can specialize in after i get an exposure to the industry.
very unstructured essay.there is no link between the various works.try to explain acads then work.work go chronologically.it seems random on tour SOP.explain more about why you choose the program.research,coursework,faculty etc.not too much but just a para rather than 1-2 lines