RachitB11

I have written an initial draft on my SOP but am still being plagued by some issues. How do I know if my SOP has become too technical.? I am finding it hard to remove the 'to be' words (is, was, are) in favor of action words. How does one do that? How do I know if I am boring the reader? How can I avoid boring him/her? It would be grateful if someone could review my SOP and give me an honest opinion. I will be very happy to send you my SOP.