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I originally took the GMAT and I was advised to try to take the GRE after failing the GMAT. I took the GRE and received the same score. I am now focused and ready to study with the Magoosh 3 month study guide. I need extreme help in writing, is there anyone out there that would be willing to grade/comment on my practice essay I did in 30 mins? Your help is greatly appreciated. Argument Essay - Practice 1 9-30-18.docx

I originally took the GMAT and I was advised to try to take the GRE after failing the GMAT. I took the GRE and received the same score. I am now focused and ready to study with the Maggosh 3 month study guide. I need extreme help in writing, is there anyone out there that would be willing to grade/comment on my practice essay I did in 30 mins? Your help is greatly appreciated. Issue Essay - Practice 1 9-30-18.docx