This is the prompt:
Please describe the academic and intellectual interests, progress, and achievements that have contributed to your decision to apply for post-graduate study.
You should include a thoughtful description of your tentative plan of study or area of inquiry at The New School for Social Research as you now envision it, the kind of research questions you intend to pursue, what you hope or expect to do after you’ve completed the degree. In addition, include a stringent self-assessment of your work as a scholar, pointing out strengths and weaknesses.
I don't want to include the stringent self-assessment b/c I've spent a lot of time detailing my area of study and research questions. Also, my adviser told me not to talk about strengths/weakness. I think the statement is very strong as it stands, but I'm worried they wont accept me because I didn't listen to their question prompt and answer all of it...