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Personal Statement criticism?
amc47 replied to crunchygum's topic in Statement of Purpose, Personal History, Diversity
To add on to what Sigaba said, you should also consider eliminating "I quickly learned I loved psychology." I have researched a lot about writing SoPs and spoken to professors on admission committees and they pretty much cringe at the "I love [insert specialty field]". They assume you love it and that's why you are applying. Make sure you show that you love it rather than just saying that you do.