SOP Review - Biomedical Sciences

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Hi Everyone,

I'm applying for the UC San Diego Biomedical Sciences PhD program and I got a draft finished for the SOP.  I'd love it if I can get a few kind individuals to take a look at it and provide me some feedback (rip it apart if you must). Please comment that you're interested and I'll PM you the doc  

Thank you!

[srujana13]

I could take a look