Please grade my issue task? Thank you :)

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ISSUE

Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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Technology has become a great part of our life. Since the advent of 20th century we have seen so much enhancements and technology driven progress in almost every field from forging tools to making live saving medical equipments, which inturn has simplified out lives to a great extent.

In earlier days, if one needed to communicate a message to a someone accross the state, it would take days for the mail to reach them and few more days for them to respond. Due to the advancement of mobile technology, now one can simply tap to make a video call to anyone across the glob just like as they were sitting across the hall. Now, one may argue that the process of how this happens is complex compared to handwritten messages, the beneifit of this technologies outperfroms the discomfort caused due a learning curve to get along with them. 

The advancements in the airline transportation technology and made possible for one to comfortably travel across the world in matter of hours which by earlier means would have taken months. It is not fair to argue that the security and visa procedure are complicating out lives. One could sure think that there absence would make the experiance more delighful but these procedures are required to ensure the safety of all the passengers. 

We cannot simply forget what technlogy had made possible medical industry. The diseases which seemed uncruable at one time, now have been completely eradicated from some countries. Technology had made dialisis and pacemakers possilble which had changed life of millions of people. 

Hence, technology has been a boon for our generation and has made our lives more comfortable.

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If possible, please explain the score and some areas where I should improve.

Thank you so much!