Would someone be willing to grade this issue essay for me?

[Freeland]

[rayatheking]

Overall your grammar is good and you have expressed yourself clearly, using good vocabulary. 
However, I think you have misunderstood the prompt. It does not say that there needs to be a single international law which will control what nations do with their wilderness. It says that nations should pass laws to preserve their wilderness - which means that Congo will have its own law, tailored for their country, while Germany can have their own laws. In light of this, I think you won’t get a very good score. You should be able to understand the prompt. 
 

However the essay itself is well written and your arguments are well crafted. 

[Laura N]

Another piece of information given in the prompt that should be included in your essay is 'any remaining'. The prompt is already pointing to a state in which wilderness areas are scarce, which is not addressed on your essay. There are some minor grammatical error but the text can be understood.