LBJ MPA Statement of Purpose Feedback

[dialectical_Dude]

Good day, all!

I am applying to LBJ at UT and probably The Bush School at Texas A&M as well.

My application is pretty much complete; I only have left to upload my Statement of Purpose. I am getting somewhat nervous and second-guessing the strength of it and would like a few opinions. I'd rather do this by PM, so if anyone has a few minutes to spare is willing to read and provide feedback, place reply here and I will send it over.

My GPA (3.4) and GRE (158V/157Q/4.5AW) could definitely be better, but my rec letters and SOP (I think) will be strong. I am hoping the rec letter does a bit to explain about my GPA and lack of extras.

 

Thank y'all.