HELP: Anyone willing to give me some feedback on my SOP?

[xmflti]

Hi, I'm on my third draft for my statement of purpose and am currently having some serious doubts about it. I would greatly appreciate a fresh pair of eyes to read over it and give me some feedback. This SOP is for the PhD program in American Studies at NYU (interdisciplinary studies - with my research interests in visual culture; social and political theory; cultural policy; urban inequality) 

Please message me if you're willing to help out this lost soul. Thank you!! 

[gradschoolcoolguy]

If you're willing to read over my SOP, I'll read over yours. Mines for a MA in TESOL, but my undergrad was in anthro and I've applied for PhD programs before, so I think I'll be familiar enough to understand what you're talking about in your SOP.