A flawed essay in need of evaluation

[Aiisha]

Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.

Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.

 

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Since the dawn of history, science and technology, as an extent of science, have provided a limitless solutions to many of mankind problems.

 

I agree with the statement that Science and Technology are capable of solving all of society's problems. From treating diseases to allowing people to travel long distances in a short amount of time. The relationship between time and the growth of Science and Technology have been directly propotional. They continue to solve problem and provide solutions to issues that humanity thought were unsolvable. I believe that the discoveries, solutions, inventions of the present can enhance the possibility of Science and Technology solving futuristic issues. As same as the solutions of the past enhanced the solutions of the present.

 

It is worth noting that assuming that science and Technology are capable of solving the entirety of humankind's problem is something we cannot be certain of.

 

[sbidyanta]

This is extremely short, and will not fetch higher than a 2. While length isn't the end all of GRE essays, a certain length is expected of them, and writing very short essays means that no matter how well you write you won't get a high score. A reasonable length is 550 words spread over 4 to 5 paragraphs.