Some serious help needed for SOP

[sena]

Hey everyone! I'm a recently graduated law student who is looking for grad schools abroad. I got accepted to some of my top choices in Europe last year but couldn't go because of financial issues. I also applied to the US but the closest thing that I came to an acceptance was getting waitlisted by Duke. However, I really wanna try again this years and I'm vry determined. So if anybody can help me wih my SOP it would be greatly appreciated, thank you!!