need my SOP to be reviewed

[harshit]

Hi everybody,

I have just joined this forum. I am a civil engineering student from IIT Roorkee. I am applying for MS in aerospace engineering with specialisation in fluids. Could someone please review my SOP? I will email it.

Because of my civil background I am not applying to the top universties. Thanks in advance!

[JessR417]

I'll critique yours if you look at mine, let me know if you're interested!