SoP Latin American History Critiques

[Jdealla]

Hey all,

I posted this in the history forum but I think this is a better place to do it. Anyone feel like helping me out and reading my SoP for Latin American history. I have Princeton and UNC decently developed. I'm looking for any kind of comments that you are willing to provide.

I was going to post it in this forum but the disclaimer above made me think before doing so. So I didn't!

Thanks to all.

-John