Can Someone Look Over My SOP To PHD Programs In IR

[nybrian]

Hey,

This is a first draft, and the grammar, and organizational structure isn't perfect, but I'd like someone to look it over to tell me the main problems with it and how I can go about fixing it.

Thanks,

[nybrian]

I'll pm you it

[IRToni]

I'd be willing to look it over. Just pm me.