nybrian Posted March 4, 2012 Share Posted March 4, 2012 Hey, This is a first draft, and the grammar, and organizational structure isn't perfect, but I'd like someone to look it over to tell me the main problems with it and how I can go about fixing it. Thanks, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nybrian Posted March 5, 2012 Author Share Posted March 5, 2012 I'll pm you it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IRToni Posted March 5, 2012 Share Posted March 5, 2012 I'd be willing to look it over. Just pm me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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