MS in Anatomy - Statement of Purpose Review?

[MrLogan]

Hello, everyone. As you can see from my post count, I am a new member here. I'm beginning the process of applying to different grad schools that offer an MS in Anatomy, and I'm hoping that some of the bright minds on here would be willing to look over my statement and offer constructive criticism. I'm about to finish my BS in Human Biology in the spring, and while I don't have any research experience per se, I have had experience dissecting cadavers and studying gross anatomy for four consecutive semesters. I'm looking at an MS in Anatomy because, well, anatomy is awesome; I also plan to use it as a stepping stone to move onto an MD program. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Just what everyone needed, another "please look at my statement" thread.

[MrLogan]

Would greatly appreciate any help.