CS SOP Critique

[LinuxMercedes]

Hey, I think I'm pretty close to being done with my statement of purpose. I'd appreciate getting some advice on it before I fill out my applications. You can grab the text of it from https://gist.github.com/LinuxMercedes/bf4b3bad4832a1b8e5d0

 

Thanks!

[zoepatel2]

Hi ! why don't you get done by some professional I did mine thru one and it was good fast editing .

 

Here is the link you could visit http://www.theeditor-world.com/

 

It helped me to thru the university of my choice

[Yetanotherdegree]

Hi ! why don't you get done by some professional I did mine thru one and it was good fast editing .

 

Here is the link you could visit http://www.theeditor-world.com/

 

It helped me to thru the university of my choice

Hmm, your first post is to promote a service? Okay...

Also, the 'about' section of the link has enough grammatical errors that I would be very hesitant to use such a service. Caveat emptor and all that.

[zoepatel2]

Hey!

 

So it was my first post...cause I had just registered on that day to this forum. That was not promotion but sharing experience, which is better than nothing!

Each to his opinion....but I spoke from experience.

 

Cheers!

 

Hmm, your first post is to promote a service? Okay...

Also, the 'about' section of the link has enough grammatical errors that I would be very hesitant to use such a service. Caveat emptor and all that.

 

Edited August 17, 2013 by zoepatel2