Could you review my Statement of purpose please?

[yuki11]

I am applying to Master's degree in petroleum engineering in the U.S.

I am a foreigner and I don't have a great English Teacher to evaluate my Statement of Purpose.

 

Could you please review my essay? I need your help.

 

Please give a comment on this post or give me a private message and I will send you my SoP.  

 

Thank you.  

[Ciarrai300]

Hi Yuki! I don't know anything about petroleum engineering so I wouldn't be able to say much on the content but I would be happy to edit it to ensure the English is correct.

[yuki11]

Thank you very much for your offer to review my essay. Any kind of help will be appreciated. I sent you a message. Thank you again

[Flandre Scarlet]

I'd be happy to read it if you still want some some evaluation.

[TexasGuy]

yes i would be happy to read it. im chemE and know quite a bit about the PetE field