Critique my SOP?

[HerrDBoo]

Would anyone be so kind as to possibly look over my SOP and give me some idea, suggestions or comments? It would be greatly appreciated. It's a work in progress, but I am trying to finalize it. I am applying for International Relation programs.

 

Thanks in advance. 

[trollinthedungeon130]

Yeah absolutely. Message it to me and I'll try to give you some useful feedback!

[kac624]

I'll read it as well! I'm in my first round of applications, so I can't claim to be an expert, but an extra set of eyes always helps. Send me a message!

[Jessica.allen]

i know this is soo annoying but if anyone wants to also proof my SOP, i would greatly appreciate it! 

[anna_M]

me too. applying to international relations as well. 

[HerrDBoo]

Thanks to all that chimed in! 

 

Again, if anyone needs some critiquing on theirs I would love to help. 

 

If anyone else would also like to take a gander at mine, please let me know.