Could anyone critique my SOP - Applying for Ph.D. in Biological Sciences

[cww]

Would anyone be willing to critique my SOP for me?  It's still going through revisions but I'd like some more input before I finalize it.  Thank you!

[the_grateful_duck]

Yeah, I can take a look at it. Would you mind if we swapped essays?

[rexzeppelin]

Can I get in on this?

[biotechie]

I would be happy to look at it after December 2. I have my last exam on that day. I will warn you, though... I'm a little harsh.

[P4ND3R]

Hi, I'd also like to get in the swap-meet.

[oceanlover]

i'd also like to swap and review!

[sunpenguin]

I would be happy to give it a read, too.