SOP Review Request - Environmental Sciences // will swap

[Vader Was Framed]

Hi Folks,

 

Having trouble honing my SOP down for my first application of five. Would be great to get a fresh pair of eyes on it who isn't my mentor. I think having someone that doesn't know me read it (like the ad com) would be great! Looking for the following feedback:

 

-Have a hit on any big no no's described in advice given on this forum?

-Am I being too general in areas?

-Am I balanced in answering the different aspects of the prompt equally? 

-I'm I selling myself enough?

 

Willing to swap.

 

I am applying to environmental sciences programs.

[katethekitcat]

I'd be willing to look at your SoP (although I don't need to swap since I've already submitted). Send me a message.

[Vader Was Framed]

PM sent .. still looking for others to read

 

this is for PhD programs by the way. thanks!

[Wako]

I'd be willing to do a swap! I'm coming up on the deadline very soon, so I'd need feedback sometime today and I'd give feedback today as well.

[NoSleepTilBreuckelen]

I'd be happy to swap as well. I have a draft just about ready that I could use some feedback on