SOP Review request - PhD in Artificial Intelligence

[sdrdis]

Hi everyone ,

 

I was wondering if someone could review my SOP for applications to PhD programs in Artificial Intelligence ? I tried to do my best and some relatives reviewed it, but since I am french I am wondering if some choices of words are correct. I am willing to review yours as well, but this would mostly work for the general structure / meaning and probably not for typos.

 

Thanks

Edited December 1, 2013 by sdrdis

[k_angie]

I am not applying for PhDs but have applied for masters in international development. I would be happy to review your sop if you want.