Could anyone critique my motivation letter?

[Guest Chiper91]

Hello. I am applying to several econ programs and I just finished drafting my motivation letter. Could anyone please critique it for me?  Personally I think it is horrible and without enough detail.

 

[Calamari2013]

Hello. I am applying to several econ programs and I just finished drafting my motivation letter. Could anyone please critique it for me?  Personally I think it is horrible and without enough detail.

Hey, I can do it. I've got an econ background too and this may help to some extent.