Request for feedback on my statement of purpose (Engineering)

[myoranges]

Hello everyone!

 

I know everyone is hustling and bustling wrapping up all the applications, but I would highly appreciate it if I could ask for feedback on my industrial engineering statement of purpose! May I send a personal message to anyone who might be interested in reading my statement of purpose?

 

Thank you very much and happy jolly new year!

Edited December 27, 2013 by myoranges

[Admissions Advice Online]

Send it over. I will take a quick look at this for you. -Admissions Advice Online

[myoranges]

Hello everyone,

 

I totally do not mean to be irksome in this forum, but I would highly appreciate any feedback for my statement of purpose! If you're interested, I would be more than happy to send my statement of purpose via PM.

 

Thank you very much!