Rate my essay - Analyze an Issue

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Question:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

 

 

 

 

As the result of fast growing technology, people rely more and more on technology to solve problems. However, people rely on technology as a tool to solve problems not as a solution. A more complex software are developed by hard working computer developers with a complex problem solving skills. Human’s curiosity will inspire us to make better technology. Finally technology are only tools for artist, creativity is what leads them to make better product. 

 

First, as software is getting smarter and smarter, it proves that the problem solving skills of our developer are improving which leads them to make better software. I am studying computer science in the college. Programing requires a strong problem solving skills and a logic ability. Behind every successful software, there are thousands and thousands lines of code with a complex logic. Because of this efficient logic skills we have, software we made are becoming a useful tool for more and more people.

 

Second, no matter what higher technology we have, it always start with an idea which comes from human’s curiosity. Ford invent cars because he wants a better transportation. Our smart phone can do a lot more than just calling and texting because people are asking more. Our curiosity can inspire us looking for more problems and improving our problem solving skills, since technology is the product of our curiosity.

Finally, technology is never a limitation of human mind, but a tool to help us growing especially in art industry. A better technology can make a movie more realistic, but it won’t limit the creativity of our movie maker. A movie scene is starting in director’s mind, then using technology as a tool to express them on the screen. A good movie is good even though it is made in the past when technology were not as good as now. Technology can help our artist make a good movie but it is their performance to make a movie better and better

 

Clearly, technology is helping us make a better world. We can’t live without technology because we are rely on them to help us. Rather than rely on technology as a solution to make better life, we are using them to as a tool to work with us. A better technology is being made because people’s curiosity and ability of thinking leads us. We are improving technology not technology improving us 

 

 

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