Review SOP for art history phd programs

[nutella]

Hi everyone, 

 

I finished my first SOP draft for my applications for art history phd programs. The second to last paragraph is tailored specifically to a certain program. This, of course, will be changed for every SOP. 

 

Would anyone, preferably art history or humanities phd students, be willing to review it for me? I would greatly appreciate it! 

[ToomuchLes]

I am applying for a PhD in American History, so I can maybe help; so long as you read my SOP and give me your opinion =) Youre welcome to PM it to me, or post it on here.