would you please take a look at my PS to apply for data science?

[zjl]

Hi, there,
There are a lot of personal statements on this forum, but I still wish you give a short look at my statement and give some suggestions.
Here is [post=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zYxvGIGFxpPSmBnRVUbCcULw0DBCRAzQ5tI8Q5pGqPo/edit]the article
I am applying for data science in Northwestern, Standford, CMU, Columbia and NYU for a MS.
Thanks for helping!

[PeakPerformance]

I tried to look at the document but don't have permission. Send me the file at info@peaktestprep.com and I will give you some quick feedback.