Critique my first PS draft? (MA in IR)

[ajollycossack]

Hey all - would anyone be willing to read a (mostly complete) first draft of my statement for an MA program in International Relations? If yes, I'm very grateful and will PM it to you.

 

Thanks thanks thanks!

[Arm457]

Hi I wouldn't mind taking a look at it. Would you mind looking at mine? I'm applying to an MA in Middle Eastern Studies/Comp Lit.

[ajollycossack]

^sounds great! I'll PM in just a bit. 

[StudyStar]

I work with a company that assists applicants with SOP writing and editing. Send me a PM with your draft and I can give you some feedback.

Edited August 6, 2015 by rising_star
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