SOP for first-choice school

[gradschoolnewbie]

I am currently in the thick of drafting an SOP for my first-choice school for my masters program. After researching the different schools and their programs, I am convinced that this particular school and the program it offers are the best fit for my academic and professional goals (don't we all feel this way about our first-choice schools?).

In this case, is it appropriate to use superlatives or other strong language to hint at the fit between myself and the school (e.g., "pursuing an MA at X University is essential in achieving my goals in life")? Or should I take out the strong language and hope that the Admissions Committee sees the fit, too? Is there a middle ground?

[rising_star]

I wouldn't use "essential" but there's definitely a middle ground you can find....

[shai]

Is it really essential ?

If i was in an admission comittee I would want to see the exact opposite - an applicant who is so sure of his/her goals that they would pursue them no matter what school they are admitted to

[socme123]

"Ideal" might work. As in, the program is an ideal fit for X and Y reasons. Don't use "essential" - makes you sound too desperate.