final editing of statement of interest

[morning glory]

Hi,

I am going to be applying very soon to the Immigration and Settlement Studies M.A. program in Toronto. Can anyone kindly read over my statement and give me feedback? I have already edited it a few times. Thank you in advance.

[Victorianna]

I will edit it.

[morning glory]

I will edit it.

Thank you very much. Can you kindly check your PM?

Edited January 11, 2010 by morning glory

[tem11]

Hi,

I am going to be applying very soon to the Immigration and Settlement Studies M.A. program in Toronto. Can anyone kindly read over my statement and give me feedback? I have already edited it a few times. Thank you in advance.

I am also up for reading over it if you want a second opinion .

[morning glory]

I am also up for reading over it if you want a second opinion .

Sure, why not. Thank you so much. I will PM my statement to you in a second.

[morning glory]

Would somone else be willing to read over my statement as well? I need as many opinions as I can get before I sumbit this thing on Thursday.

[Smile of Fury]

I'll read it. PM it to me and I'll get it back to you Tuesday.

[morning glory]

I'll read it. PM it to me and I'll get it back to you Tuesday.

Just sent you a PM

[tem11]

Just sent you a PM

I finished editing it! Sorry about my previous PM saying I'd look over it within the next few days, I didn't realize you needed it by Thursday. I'd prefer to email you a Word attachment since it has all of my comments on it, so please PM me with your email address and I'll get it out to you as soon as possible. I'm more than happy to look over second, third or fourth drafts.