would anyone be willing to critique/exchange SOPs?

[viveke]

Just hoping for an extra set of eyes before I send my current draft to my professor/letter writer- I'm a bit nervous about his reading it and don't want to embarrass myself too much. I'm technically applying to anthropology but a lot of my interests are social psychology related. If anyone has a few extra minutes to spare I would really appreciate it, and would be happy to read anyone's as well  

[01848p]

I've already submitted most of my apps so mine is good to go but I'd be happy to take a look at yours