Anyone who'd like to review my MS in Computer Science SOP?

[mallika2608]

 A bit confused regarding how detailed I should be at certain places. Took feedback from a couple of people, but still need some more. Let me know if anyone's up for it! 

Thanks,

[mallika2608]

Also willing to swap SoPs!

[sivakumaranandan]

I can review the SOP, if required.