Way Too Early Review -- Education

[username111]

My plan was to apply for fall 2017 entry into an education policy program, but I had a health issue that prevented me from applying. I had already written an SOP and just came across this forum. Thought I'd see if someone could give me advice on whether I'm on the right track. Like I mentioned in the title, this is way too early (for the fall 2018 admission cycle) but I thought I'd seek some feedback. Specifically, I am interested in knowing whether it is not personable enough and whether my "why I'm applying to this university" part is clear enough.

Please send me a PM if you would like to do a review!

Edited December 23, 2016 by username111

[Expateacher]

Hi. I can take a look at your SOP of you like. I'm in education too but not policy.