SOP for PhD in History

[Tigla]

Hello all,

 

This is my second time through the cycle, and as usual, I'm having some problems with the SOP. Right now, I think I will benefit most from someone reading it over and commenting on it. I can keep trying to edit it, but I don't see the point when I have tightened up the SOP and have what I want to say in it. So, if anyone is interested in doing a quick read through, please comment then I will PM you the document. Thank you in advance.

[artlesspredilection]

I can give it a quick go! 

[alanine]

I know this is a few weeks old, but I would be happy to read it as well.