Diversity Statement Editing Exchange

[GreenEyedTrombonist]

Hey all,

So I've had a plethora of people look over my SoP and I think it's much stronger as a result. However, I am a very private person about my "identification" (i.e. all those lovely boxes you check off on a census). I will not be showing my diversity statement to family and friends as a result. 

In short, anyone willing to look over my Diversity Statement? Strangers on the internet are the best. <3 I'm also willing to look over your Diversity Statement or SoP in exchange.