Feedback on SOP? (Sustainable Design / Construction)

[laekkauai]

Hi, 

I'm wondering if anyone here would be willing to look over my statement of purpose?

I have a social science background (work as a planner in an architecture and planning firm) but I'm applying to a Master of Science program in Sustainable Design and Construction within the School of Civil and Environmental Engineering. The program is a bit more planning/design/life cycle assessment focused, but I'm still worried since I don't have a strong background in STEM.  

[sid7395]

Hi,

I have a urban planning background as well. I'd love to take a look at your SOP if you're still looking for some feedback on it. PM me