SOP Review (Law School)

[samman1994]

Hello Everyone,

I have a friend that is applying to Law Schools across the country, and he asked me if I could look over his SOP. I don't know anything about law schools nor what they look for in SOPs however, so I was hoping someone here (in that field) could take a quick look at it and just give some simple feedback on if its good or if there is anything that needs to be changed/modified. It's 2 pages double spaced, so very short. Thank you guys ahead of time!