aethiryn,
Thank you for the feedback. I agree with all of the points you made. I do know that I need editing. There is a distinguishable difference between some of my older and newer works that don't quite fit for a portfolio. The goal now is just to create new, cohesive works to add so I can have a complete portfolio. I found it interesting that you grouped my work into two separate collections (process and architecture). I seek out to have a balance between the two and the idea that one is winning out over the other is something to think about. And yes, my statement needs work. Oh, how I hate the statement. It is by far the most difficult part for me. I haven't quite figured out just exactly what I want to say or perhaps just the right way to say it. Applications are coming up fast so I'll be writing away soon and when I have a more solid statement I'll let you (everyone) know.