I have a 3.95 GPA from NYU. I have letters from Sharon Street, Robert Hopkins, and Crispin Wright. I studied under Sharon Street for nearly a year, including via an independent study. She knew me very well and was always encouraging of my work. I became acquainted with Robert Hopkins through a grad seminar I took for credit. He warned me that the class would be difficult, but I finished with an A. He told me personally that he liked my contributions in class, that I was writing on a graduate level, and that it'd be surprising if I didn't get into more than one program. Presumably they both wrote me good letters. I only took one course with Crispin Wright, but I don't believe he would agree to write me a letter if he had nothing good to say. I'll admit it: my GRE scores are crap. But I was hoping that wouldn't play a huge role.
I applied to 15 programs, and I have 0 acceptances so far. I have to believe that my writing sample is the reason for that.
I developed my sample under Sharon Street for my independent study. My paper is basically a critique of Richard Joyce's linguistic step of moral error theory. I sketch his linguistic step as a hypothesis about the meanings of moral terms, and then I develop and defend a hypothesis according to which the meanings of moral terms are variable across speech communties and contexts. The result is that Joyce can't drive his hyperbolic claims about the widespread falsity of moral claims. I next draw a distinction between a "weak" and "hard" moral error theory, and argue that moral error theory should proceed along the former lines and target very specific concepts (or speech communities).
I've been told by an NYU grad student that my paper "defends an interesting, and not too ambitious, claim well. I’ve seen quite a few writing samples of successful applicants to NYU and many of them are obviously worse than yours." Richard Joyce has read it and told me it makes a good writing sample, and Michael Gill from UArizona read it and said it was excellent. (I got rejected from Arizona. Go figure.) It wasn't until Stephen Schiffer read my paper that I got largely negative reactions, and by that point, it was too late to make any major changes.
My concern is that my paper defends a conclusion that is - at the end of the day - not too interesting. But I was encouraged to write the paper because the result seems overlooked by most contemporary defenders of moral error theory. Derek Parfit also worried the paper isn't "distinctively philosophical," and I know there is a great deal of hate for experimental philosophy, which a portion of my paper relies on.
Ironically, I was developing a paper for Hopkins' seminar that was much more traditional and more philosophical. The paper was largely a critique of Nelson Goodman, but I spent some time sketching a unique theory by the end. I showed Hopkins both papers and he thought they were evenly matched. Parfit felt the same and encouraged me to use the metaethics paper.
So, now I'm just a little lost. Is it possible that philosophers can be poor judges of what will ultimately make a good writing sample? Because I've gotten largely positive feedback, and now I wish I had consulted with Schiffer sooner.
I'm also trying to figure out which mistakes to avoid making the next time around. If any of you would like to check out my paper and give me your impression, it would be extremely helpful for the next season - if I decide to apply again.